DID I REVISE THESE RIGHT?
Original:If you want adventure, culture, artifacts, and famous buildings, then Italy is the place you want to be, especially Rome and Florence. Revised:Tourists who want to experience adventure, culture, artifacts and famous buildings, Italy, Rome and Florence are the places you want to visit. Original 2. If you wanted to marry a person who was not a prince or princess, then your family would try to get you out of the household and disown you. Revised: People who do not marry a prince or princess, will be banned from the household and disowned by family. Original:.You might want to consider buying a laptop instead of a desktop because laptops take up less space. Revised:Being that desktops take up more space you may want to consider buying a laptop Did i revise these correctly??
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